‘Dream Season’ by Ramesh Anand
Ramesh has been posting enchanting haiku regularly. Very rarely has he come out with a string of haiku on the same theme, as he has done here with Spring, his dream season. He has put together eight delightful haiku that offer memorable vignettes of the season and show his keen sense of observation as in
spring drizzle
the bipinnate leaves
fold into shyness.
My response:
It's great to be part of this honoured list and very proud to have captured the thoughts of eminent writers and judges, Sivakami Ma'am and Ibohal Sir. I always had the question whether haiku and similar short verses would get noted in this hugh list of highly competitive free verses by new to eminent writers. It is answered now!
Congrats to Samrat and fello honoured poets for toping the list this month.
It's also wonderful to see Your Space attracting lots of new writers every month. It's great to read the poems of new members.
I have really come a long away in haiku starting with Muse India on June'10.
Many thanks to all the editors of Muse India starting with GSP Rao sir, Kala, Prabu Sir to ex-editors of Your Space, Mallick and Seshu Sirs, also to all the poets of Your Space who has been driving me to where I am now and where I want to be in future.
Dream Season
spring dream
a rooster stirs the stillness
into dawn
spring day
spots of rosiness
in the bud
spring morning
a rose wallah
dresses a boquet
hot spring bath –
the nibbling fish
tingle my skin
waters of spring
father backstrokes
into healthiness
spring drizzle
the bipinnate leaves
fold into shyness
spring rain...
the scent of green in
the dawn breeze
spring moon
the scent of jasmine
spreading in the night